I have said it before, but I think you really need to push your poses on these, stuff like 3,7,9, and 13 feel kinda bleh, they look like they are headed in the right direction but need a severe push to be more dynamic. I love 10, it feels very natural and balanced. For the rest, think of like a clumsy warner brothers character losing their balance, and really try to add that intensity to the poses. all and all though, Good stuff though, man!
Thanks for the feedback Dominic. Just to clarify, these are initial pass drawings, meaning the first idea I throw down on paper. Once I decide on the concept that has the most potential, I'll totally start refining it and pushing it. Don't think of these as "final" art in the slightest. Anyway, don't stop commenting, I really appreciate it : )
12 gets my vote here. also I assume these are a school mandated type pose but I would love to see some of these guys with shoulders worked in.
2 & 9 represent balance the most but just my opinion. great work though.
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