From a technical standpoint, I think this one's very nice.However, I think this particular pose is a bit overdone, and as such the scene comes across as generic. I think had you given him a more subdued pose, or just something unexpected, then the story of the character would be more interesting. For example, him sitting on a toilet taking a poo, with his sword stuck in the ground next to him. Just an idea.
that is an excellent suggestion.
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