This is a nice sketch. I like the orange palette, it is both calm and a little foreboding. Your strokes look really efficient here, I'm jealous of your decisiveness.I think you are missing some foreground elements in this piece. I find myself looking at the bottom corners and getting stuck there. It's really dark on the right side but there is nothing of interest to look at there. Is it a cliff side? A forest? Some more complimentary colors could help this image too. More cools in the foreground could help push the background back a bit as well. That's the end of my rambling crits. Keep doing these!
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