Cool design Dominic. The foreshortening on the arms looks a little off. Maybe thicken up the forearms a little to better sell that perspective. Also, I'd love to see the skull seperated out from her gauntlet-thing a little more.
Wow, Dominic listened to us... I don't know that THAT'S a great idea. Anyway, not to be a total nag, but now the skull doesn't really fit your color pallette and is really becoming the point of focus. Maybe just using that Highlight gray you've got on the hair might be better.
Updates --- Rested her arm on the chair, made hand and forearm bigger, also brightened the skull and made it a pink rather then yellow so it doesnt get lost in the gauntlet, thanks for the critiques and keep them coming! I have alot of mistakes to learn from yet!
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love the style. Next question...is she single?
Cool design Dominic. The foreshortening on the arms looks a little off. Maybe thicken up the forearms a little to better sell that perspective. Also, I'd love to see the skull seperated out from her gauntlet-thing a little more.
Her right arm (our left) looks a bit awkward, like it should be relaxed a bit. She most certainly has had a boob job.
Wow, Dominic listened to us... I don't know that THAT'S a great idea. Anyway, not to be a total nag, but now the skull doesn't really fit your color pallette and is really becoming the point of focus. Maybe just using that Highlight gray you've got on the hair might be better.
Updates --- Rested her arm on the chair, made hand and forearm bigger, also brightened the skull and made it a pink rather then yellow so it doesnt get lost in the gauntlet, thanks for the critiques and keep them coming! I have alot of mistakes to learn from yet!
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