Thursday, July 31, 2008


another gameartisans mini comp... about an hour and a half in.

3 comments:

Nickster said...

I like it, you've really got a nice mood set. I'd like to see this one have more time spent on it and really cleaned up and rendered out a bit more

Kelsey said...

Nice composition and concept. It looks good. The thing that bugs me is that there isn't much separation of depth between the foreground and the middle ground, considering the scale of the scene. The "middle ground" in this scene is very far from the two figures, but there doesn't seem to be enough differentiation in color, saturation or brightness to push that creature way back to really make it seem huge.

Dave said...

Ya man im with Kels on this one. I'd say the concentration of detail in your middle ground is about equal to you foreground. Maybe think about some atmospheric perspective to combat the conflicting fore/mod grounds.