I would force some value separation here. The pillar in the middle should come forward more than it does and maybe shift it to one side a bit. All the pieces are there just make something the focus :)
I agree with Caleb. The lighting on the focal point doesn't match the rest of the image also. The whole image needs a more solid light source as well. It's hard to tell where the light is coming from on the various rock formations and trees. Overall it's a cool concept though. I love Indiana Jones-esque cliff side civilizations.
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I would force some value separation here. The pillar in the middle should come forward more than it does and maybe shift it to one side a bit. All the pieces are there just make something the focus :)
I agree with Caleb. The lighting on the focal point doesn't match the rest of the image also. The whole image needs a more solid light source as well. It's hard to tell where the light is coming from on the various rock formations and trees. Overall it's a cool concept though. I love Indiana Jones-esque cliff side civilizations.
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